Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and the telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.
it is a widely supported notion that transportation system is boosted by the airplane as well as communication is flourished by the telephone, as a result, nations all over the world has come together and intently developing the global society. I believe that the internet is another technological blessing that cover the whole world with its shade. My next sentences will put light on the significant of the internet including all of its pros and cons.
First and foremost, internet holds data which is similar to a life, nowadays. If we need any types of information we can search and find it within fewer seconds. For instances, sometimes we need data for shopping a product such as watch, mobile, dresses and to name a few, we can analyze the prices by searching them in the websites. Moreover, internet is helping us to watch live communication from the distant ends. By the virtues of the online service, we can book bus, train, and even, train tickets. Students, doctors, engineers including all professional persons are completely dependable on the online service.
Furthermore, I have to mention about a service of internet that is used by the police, armies or any defensive and detective organizations. They can track the culprit's location and activities using internet. It is very influential sector of the invisible giant. Likewise, many students, freelancer, unemployed persons can earn by online marketing or helping a client. They can't think a single moment without the internet.
In contrast, we are getting cheated by the internet hackers. sometimes they can track our bank properties or steal our important data. They are deceiving with many people nobody can identify them, thus the dark net is getting stronger. The criminals can contact with these darknets for all of their illegal activities. If we can improve the artificial intelligence then it will be very easier to find the remedy for stopping the hackers. Similarly, the defense departments should technologically sounder so that they can break the codes of the smugglers. If all of us use the internet in a good way then the positive consequences outweigh the negative effects.
In conclusion, the internet is the update influential invention of modern technology like airplane and telephone. Though internet has many negative sides, it can be blessing for us, I believe. It will fuel the new generation to make the world a beautiful place for living by altering the human efforts in various industries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, second, similarly, so, then, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2085.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12285012285 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92932814179 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562653562654 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3336776845 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.875 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9583333333 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107350130961 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0295938430187 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369235382143 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654371095717 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268740782121 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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