Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and the telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.
Technological advancement is crucial in our society in order to improve our quality of life. Nowadays, we are able to communicate immediately with any person throughout the globe. From my point of view, one of the most important contributions in the field of technology has been the internet because of the benefits that it has generated. I feel this way for two main reasons explained in the following essay.
First and foremost, the internet has allowed instant and effective communication among individuals. Some centuries ago, information was slowly spread because it had to be delivered physically. The delivery of a letter written by a husband living in Paris to his wife in Berlin could have taken weeks, but now any message like this can be read in the exact moment it is sent. For example, via the Facebook application, I can, from Chile, call my friend who lives in Germany and have a high-quality conversation.
Additionally, the Internet allows us to be informed of what is happening in the precise second of the action. Although this improvement can be attributed to the television some decades before the internet, it is indisputable that the World Wide Web offers even more resources to use to keep informed. To illustrate this, on the platform of Twitter, I can read what is happening in several parts of the world at the same time. I can see that James Cameron just won an award at the Oscars and that a Chilean politician was found guilty of a felony.
Finally, the cyberspace provides plentiful information on any subject. There are millions of websites that could be equivalent to millions of books that are easily accessible. In the past, the main source to complete assignments for university students was the library. However, this idea is prehistoric, because most students search for information primarily on the internet. You can find updated research and papers with just one click.
In summary, there is no doubt why the internet is one of the most important advancements ever.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, for example, i feel, in summary, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9881305638 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93389738684 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587537091988 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1260516735 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3888888889 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7222222222 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0956649331641 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0298276175259 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294643962519 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0548486584292 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414881640192 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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