Agree or disagree?
Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems.
The advancement of technology happening at a very fast pace which alters human lives. one of this development is the internet. It provides a lot of valuable information for people. Views differ when it comes to the effect of this information on our life. In my point of view, the internet's advantages are more compare to its disadvantages.
First, the internet creates a great source of information for a group of people that are located in remote zones. Today the connection of the internet exists in all areas and because of that many students have access to the internet. this access provides many sources of information for people especially students in remote villages. If they do not have access to a certain book or can not purchase it, They can easily search and find it by the use of the internet. as we know, in the remote regions sometimes there was not a good teacher or a good source of a book for the student to study them. The internet removed this obstacle and provide essential information especially for these areas.
Second, the internet contains much knowledge about all sorts of science. in the world of science, there are popular many professors that are expert in their field. They use the internet to share their idea or publish their finding. Many of them explain their understanding by video and put it on their or other websites. Students can use this idea and information to improve their knowledge or enhance their weakness in a certain course by study their idea or watching their videos. For example, Coursea is a website contain many tutorials in different areas. instructors of these tutorials are knowledgeable professors and all of them are working in top universities. These courses are like a classroom. Students can assign to the courses, watch these courses and learn more. These courses contain assignments and it exactly stimulates a classroom with a teacher.
Third, the internet helps us to understand news around the world faster compare to the past. In the past, it takes a few days for newspapers to publish the happening events around the world. However, there are platforms and applications like Tweeter and Instagram which cover all events happening recently around the world. For instance, if there is a war happen in the middle east we can find out about it very fast since all of the people talk about it on Tweeter and Instagram.
To make a long story short, the internet gave us much crucial information due to the mentioned paragraphs. It is obvious that internet engendered copious issues but its merits are much more.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, third, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2144.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88382687927 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69731959998 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469248291572 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3050336038 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4074074074 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2592592593 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187097747462 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549496724327 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630543278883 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105592188707 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577059764553 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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