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Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

There is no shadow of a doubt that since the dawn of humanity, people's relationships have undergone dramatic changes. Each connection has specific rules and consideration for itself. people may look for honesty, loyalty, thoughtfulness, to name but a few, but no one can turn a blind eye to the importance of truthfulness in a relationship. when it comes to this point, it is the question of many individuals that whether telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between persons or not. personally speaking, I am of the opinion that being honest in every situation is the most pivotal factor to have a long-lasting friendship, marriage, business cooperation, and all kinds of relationships. In the ensuing paragraphs, I will delve into my reasons to elaborate on my point of view. first and paramount reason comes to my mind to substantiate my answer is that truthfulness boost the sense of trust and confidence in two sides of a relationship. As it is said, honesty is the best policy. In other words, people prefer to communicate with persons who have the merit of honesty. when our partner know that we prefer to tell the truth even when we are not the beneficiary, s/he will be sure that in future s/he can trust us. For instance, when our company went bankrupt, one of our co-working companies, which had a considerable number of project with us during the past years, proposed to give us a long term loan. At first, that offer surprised other members of the company and me, but when we asked from that company the reason for this favour, they answered that because of the long-time cooperation based on truthfulness and honesty, they decided to help us get out of the bankruptcy. If we had not had an honest relationship with our co-working business partners, they would not have trusted us and gave us that loan. Another noteworthy reason in supporting my opinion is that telling the truth is much more comfortable in the long run. Although telling the truth may be hard for one on some occasions, it will dispense one with future lies. it is evident that telling an infinitesimal lie leads to telling a chain of lies which are aimed to cover the very first lie. this can cause nervousness and anxiety for the one who told the lie. To put it into a more vivid picture, take my own experience as an example. when I was a teenager, I told a simple lie to my mom. after that, I was always nervous about the repercussions of my lie and had to tell more lies to prevent my mom notice my first lie. after a short period, I decided to tell the truth. Fortunately, my mom forgave me, and I took my lesson that in any dilemma of telling the truth or not choose the first one. having told the truth, I became happy and relaxed. To wrap it up, all reasons as mentioned earlier lead us to the conclusion that one should never hesitate to tell the truth because it makes him/her needless to future lies and strengthen his/her relationships to have durable social connections, economic partnerships and friendships.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 2636, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: had
... one of our co-working companies, which had had a considerable number of project with u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, so, then, for instance, in other words, to tell the truth

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4577.0 1977.66487455 231% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 615.0 407.700716846 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.44227642276 4.8611393121 153% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97987886753 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.48716877659 2.67179642975 318% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 324.0 212.727598566 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526829268293 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 1271.7 618.680645161 206% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.1 1.51630824373 138% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 144.082345283 48.9658058833 294% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 190.708333333 100.406767564 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0493551261251 0.236089414692 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417542342837 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401583195664 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0493551261251 0.150856017488 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.4 11.7677419355 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.8 58.1214874552 7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.1575268817 186% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 26.17 10.9000537634 240% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 180.0 86.8835125448 207% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 10.247311828 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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