Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
At the turn of the new century, no one can turn a blind eye to the enormous direct and indirect effects of technology on people's lives. People's attitudes toward this subject are widely varied from person to person. A simple recognition of this argument lends our discussion to the question of how people can feel a deep sense of satisfaction in their lives. Although some people adhere to this belief that in the past, people were more happier, in my vantage point, nowadays with the development of human's modern society and numerous inventions for living conveniently, people are more satisfaction.
The first aspect to point out is that what provokes people to experience happier lives is a lot of inventions in modern era. As a matter of fact, life is replete with ups and downs all over the world. Every person tries to have an ideal life. It is noteworthy that some breakthroughs such as cell-phone, nanotechnology, laser and so on, help people to experience easier lives. Take a case of a person who lives abroad and he cannot travel to his country soon. With a mobile, he can make contact and communicate with his family and feel a deep sense of satisfaction. In contrast, if he cannot get in touch with family, he will be a depressed person. As a result, being a happy person is a significant merit of easier life with several new inventions in the world which is changing rapidly.
Furthermore, another subtle point is that nowadays, people feel more satisfied because there are many job opportunities for them, so it can be considered another advantage of the world which is changed so quickly. Without a shadow of doubt, today's life is very different from that of the past. Technology is developing so fast, so people should enhance their knowledge to keep up with this situation, and acquire a decent job. Undoubtedly, there are many jobs for people nowadays in comparison with the past, so people can gain a worthwhile job that leads them to a golden future. According to recent research conducted in my country, psychologists are in the convection that nowadays, people are able to make choose different jobs based on their fulfillments. As a consequence, the world which is changing so quickly has numerous advantages for people such as finding a decent job.
On the whole, according to above-mentioned points and details, it is crystal-clear that people now are happier more than the past because of fast changing in the world can help them to life easier. It is high time we stopped overlooking the fact that people in the past feel more satisfied. Have you ever seen a life without any inventions and development? I absolutely believe no.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 432, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...is belief that in the past, people were more happier, in my vantage point, nowadays with the...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'while', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'as a result', 'on the whole']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245059288538 0.229887763892 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.134387351779 0.158761421928 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102766798419 0.0866891130778 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0434782608696 0.046263068375 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0434782608696 0.0685040099705 63% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136363636364 0.118717715034 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0296442687747 0.0351676179071 84% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8420612678 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0296442687747 0.0309702414327 96% => OK
Particles: 0.00395256916996 0.00188951952338 209% => OK
Determiners: 0.106719367589 0.0887237588012 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0197628458498 0.0209618222197 94% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0158102766798 0.0139019557991 114% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2659.0 2387.08602151 111% => OK
No of words: 456.0 408.028673835 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83114035088 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.350877192982 0.338922669872 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.230263157895 0.251872472559 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.160087719298 0.174417080927 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116228070175 0.112833075102 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8420612678 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497807017544 0.524397521467 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 56.744729359 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.7272727273 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3668111182 48.84282405 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.863636364 120.699889404 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 43.7535885167 45.7405998639 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.85714285714 1.45489161554 128% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405929254276 0.300154397459 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113999962736 0.103427244359 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0829754203638 0.0752933317313 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.462494428761 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157010486109 0.151897553556 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13889083946 0.114077575197 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958315324821 0.0781384742642 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.371557509309 0.336927656856 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0197104043594 0.067059652881 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291460018478 0.210909579961 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618677139209 0.0618886996521 100% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.