Best friend

Essay topics:

Best friend

For me the best friend is someone for whom we can open a door to our inter world. I have a couple of best friends. Both of them are named Marina.
Firstly, when we are together we don't care about some formalities and can allow being sincere with each other without any disguises no matter how joyful or sad the moment is. We are not hide our emotional mood, because my best friends accept all of my personality as I do too.
Secondly, my best friends appreciate our relationships and carefully help me in a difficult situations. Also, they never take umbrage with me, even when I'm wrong. We love each other and know that all what we do is not because of some abusing reasons.
Forgiveness and embracing personality of a friend is a kay to best friends relationships.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ina. Firstly, when we are together we dont care about some formalities and can all...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'situation'?
Suggestion: situation
...ps and carefully help me in a difficult situations. Also, they never take umbrage with me,...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...y never take umbrage with me, even when Im wrong. We love each other and know tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 52.1666666667 25% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 632.0 1977.66487455 32% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 140.0 407.700716846 34% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51428571429 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 4.48103885553 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66289699541 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 212.727598566 44% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664285714286 0.524837075471 127% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 618.680645161 33% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9456128282 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2222222222 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5555555556 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359998133876 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176072071178 0.076458572812 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180928441842 0.0737576698707 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291490341699 0.150856017488 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162821336666 0.0645574589148 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 86.8835125448 26% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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