Books are person's best friend. Agree or disagree?
People read a book for various reasons such as enjoyment, getting knowledge; improve reading skill, learning language and so on... However, the question is books person's best friend? From my view point books never become best friend of a person for following reasons.
To begin with, people can share their emotion and feeling with the best friend but book is not person and it not understands the people feeling. For an example, I completed my graduation with A grades, I was ecstatic to share my happiness with my close ones. I called my best friend and my friend and I went restaurant celebrated party for graduation. I really enjoyed my dinner with close ones. But, if my best friend is book then, how can I share my happiness with book? Book is not living thing that a person share feeling.
Furthermore, best friend help in any good and bad situation. They give us best advice or help to solve problem. However, books not solve our personal problems. People have not one problem in life but huge problems solve by other person not by books. Some books give ways to reach the solution but not help in real life. If, person needs little money or any things, he takes it to his best friend. But, books not fulfill our needs.
Moreover, people make memory with best friend but it is not possible with book. When, a person read the book he only imagine book story characters and feature but in real life is not present. Long time pass with book is monotonous but it is not happen when our best friend with us. For an instance, every vacation I traveled in train to go for home and each time my friend traveled with me and we shared our experience and idea about life to each other, but one year ago, my friend not came with me and I traveled alone, I really felt boring to reading book in whole journey because no one there for talk with me. I read book for two hour but after I exhausted with book. If my best friend came with me, I was easily pass time with him.
In brief, books never replace person present. Books is only source of knowledge and pass time but is never become person's best friend because of person cannot share feeling and emotion with book, person not enjoying book company and books are not help in difficult situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 192, Rule ID: A_PLURAL
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A grade' or simply 'grades'?
Suggestion: A grade; Grades
...example, I completed my graduation with A grades, I was ecstatic to share my happiness w...
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'us the best'.
Suggestion: us the best
...n any good and bad situation. They give us best advice or help to solve problem. Howeve...
Line 4, column 117, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'imagines'.
...k. When, a person read the book he only imagine book story characters and feature but i...
Line 4, column 245, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'happened'.
...s with book is monotonous but it is not happen when our best friend with us. For an in...
Line 4, column 334, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO
Message: Did you mean 'going', 'gonna'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: going; gonna
...nce, every vacation I traveled in train to go for home and each time my friend travel...
Line 4, column 634, Rule ID: CD_NN
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
...e for talk with me. I read book for two hour but after I exhausted with book. If my ...
Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'helped'.
...enjoying book company and books are not help in difficult situation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, in brief, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49877750611 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20245497616 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459657701711 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.6287340421 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6666666667 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0416666667 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.79166666667 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359958497368 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158296486085 0.076458572812 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103431107125 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273886192957 0.150856017488 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601360696927 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.