Do you agree or disagree with the following it is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a large city

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Do you agree or disagree with the following: it is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a large city.

It is very important for kids to grow in a healthy environment. In my opinion, I believe that it is more advantageous for kiddos to grow in the cities.I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explore in my body paragraphs.

To begin with, children that have the opportunity to live in urban centres tend to visit places such as museums, amusement parks, tourist centres, cinemas e.t.c.To be more specific,I am a mother that really cares about children so when i am not around, I am rest assured that my children will be doing very fine.Drawing from my own experience, my husband and I work the state government and we do return home very late at night.So we aren’t bordered much on how our children would survive after closing at school.Once they left school, they always visit the playing ground to play with their peers and this has really helped them such that they now have a large network of friends.As soon as i return from work, i would quickly go and pick them and this i do everyday without seeing it as an arduous task.In contrast, kids in the rural areas are limited because hardly would you found facilities that children could lay their hands on.Therefore a lot of them do have issues when they finally live the countryside.for this reason, it is certainly clear to see how cities help children to have fun.

Furthermore, cities open opportunities for children because they meet people from different walks of life.More importantly, they get to meet people and learn about their cultures, foods and festivals.My little niece is a clear illustration of this.He was opportuned to live in the heart of New york.So whenever the mum is not around, she is always staying with her neighbour that speaks deutsch.Since then she has developed so much interest with the neighbours kids such that she always mimic her whenever she speaks.Besides, the woman has always remain a bulwark for my little niece anytime her mum is not around..

In light of the reasons mentioned, i believe that kids that dwell in urban centers experience a lot of benefits.This is because they have a a lot of recreational centres to explore, and because it helps them to meet people of different tribes.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, furthermore, if, really, so, then, therefore, well, i feel, in contrast, such as, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79210526316 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75883245408 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 76.0 20.1344086022 377% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 380.13555477 48.9658058833 776% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 364.2 100.406767564 363% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 76.0 20.6045352989 369% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.6 5.45110844103 470% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.5376344086 524% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161245982245 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835840257272 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486265688117 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856162001203 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557638481617 0.0645574589148 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.1 11.7677419355 332% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.26 58.1214874552 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 10.1575268817 301% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.69 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.01818996416 130% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 32.4 10.0537634409 322% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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