Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising can tell you a lot about a country. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In my view advertisement could tell us about the social status and culture of the people in a country. Some people believe that the advertising can tell others about the people who live in a country; others would disagree. I personally concur that we can learn a lot about the people of a society by watching their advertisement for the following reasons.
First and foremost, advertisement are showing the materials and services that people in a country need. For example, they never advertise a cooler system in a place that has a really cold weather all the year. I remember last year, the company that I work in, decided to send me for a peoject to India. Until that time, I have always though that people in India are really religous people and they still use the costume that they ancester used to put on. A week before I travel to that country, I just decided to check their TV cahnnels through the net. The first thing that I saw was advertising which was about a known brand of a leather clothes. At first I was shocked and I though that I made a mistake. But after that I relized that I was completely wrong about the appereance of people in India. It was amazing because by watching commercial for about five minute I learned a lot about the people who live in India and it helped me alot.
Second, I believe that advertisments strongly depend on the culture and religion of the people of that area. For instance, the way that they advertise a product in a developed country is completely different from the way that they try to inform a people of a flourishing country. I rememeber that I watch advertisment of a car in two different channels. One of them show the car that is used by a fashion boy which was really happy by buying that car and he really had lots of fun after purchasing that car. Another one which was for channel of a Islamic country showed that an old man is driving that car and he is really happy becasue by buying that car he can spend a lot of time with his family. As you can see the advertisment should be based on the culture of people, otherwise, it cannot be successful.
Due to the aforementioned reasons, I think not only should the advertisment show the requirement of the people who watch that,but also it have to be based on the culture of them.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'as for', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.212719298246 0.229887763892 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.160087719298 0.158761421928 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0460526315789 0.0866891130778 53% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0438596491228 0.046263068375 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0877192982456 0.0685040099705 128% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.160087719298 0.118717715034 135% => OK
Participles: 0.030701754386 0.0351676179071 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60016106852 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0175438596491 0.0309702414327 57% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.125 0.0887237588012 141% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0197368421053 0.0209618222197 94% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0219298245614 0.0139019557991 158% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2301.0 2387.08602151 96% => OK
No of words: 422.0 408.028673835 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45260663507 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.298578199052 0.338922669872 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.201421800948 0.251872472559 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.120853080569 0.174417080927 69% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0758293838863 0.112833075102 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60016106852 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462085308057 0.524397521467 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.2959316991 59.2087087015 85% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2105263158 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3688126545 48.84282405 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.105263158 120.699889404 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2105263158 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.684210526316 0.644075263715 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 42.3527064106 45.7405998639 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.38345864662 1.45489161554 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193202631639 0.300154397459 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.158751376777 0.103427244359 153% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.120148036879 0.0752933317313 160% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.554738406836 0.497263757937 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161823155056 0.151897553556 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862454055315 0.114077575197 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480836823206 0.0781384742642 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.441111310764 0.336927656856 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0326921380903 0.067059652881 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151015017725 0.210909579961 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506567721594 0.0618886996521 82% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8870967742 34% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.91756272401 224% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.42114695341 47% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 10.0 2.75985663082 362% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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