Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Truth is the powerful weapon and on the basis of that arsenal the world is going on. When someone disregard the truth then the idea of trickery, deception and devastation happens. In relationship being truthfulness is the utmost priority is the given statement and with this someone would agree and others would disagree. In my viewpoint, the importance of truth for continuing relationship is paramount. I think in this way for the following two important reason.
The main reason is that truth helps to save someone believes. In our life believe is importance as we know the proverb 'Honesty is the best policy'. Without honesty no organization is possible to survive. For example, think about our country Bangladesh where a large number of people are living by hand to mouth. They are earning the income by working different factories such as garments, construction etc. A few days ago I have been reading an article from our country newspaper titled with 'An apex of relationship in between employee and CEO'. On this article it elaborates how close the relationship a worker and the CEO of that company as the employee guards the instrument for his CEO in his absence without doing any corruption. In addition he protects from intruders. In the end, CEO has believed on that employee and reward him a sum of money. As you can see that truth is also rewarding if it is possible to earn someone belief by exposing the truth and honesty.
Another reason is that being truthful is also required to continue any relationship. Due to the falsehood we have seen many love and family relation broke apart. In the beginning of that relationship it is fine, everyone is truthful but by passing days when they are started to lie on another then the real hurdles begins. Finally, they are forced to separate and these scenarios engender another events and so on. For instance, my cousin married a few years ago. In the beginning of their marriage, my sister in law told she have not any relationship with anyone. After months, one day my cousin discovered her during she made a phone call with her ex-boyfriend. Moreover, it was deciphered that she had four years of relation with that man. Eventually, my cousin got separated. This experience taught me that the need of truth is indelible to continue our life chores.
In sum, although it is possible to argue with me by taking other side but in reality it will rather causes many hurdles. As truth is rewarding at the same time helps to persist our relationship with our close on. So, we should be practiced truthfulness from the very early of our life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'disregards'.
Suggestion: disregards
...nal the world is going on. When someone disregard the truth then the idea of trickery, de...
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Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...hink about our country Bangladesh where a large number of people are living by hand to mouth. The...
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Line 3, column 737, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...bsence without doing any corruption. In addition he protects from intruders. In the end,...
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Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun love seems to be countable; consider using: 'many loves'.
Suggestion: many loves
...ship. Due to the falsehood we have seen many love and family relation broke apart. In the...
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Line 5, column 504, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: sister-in-law
... In the beginning of their marriage, my sister in law told she have not any relationship with...
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Line 5, column 527, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...eir marriage, my sister in law told she have not any relationship with anyone. After...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
...ther side but in reality it will rather causes many hurdles. As truth is rewarding at ...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ity it will rather causes many hurdles. As truth is rewarding at the same time hel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2156.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79111111111 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69818045686 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528888888889 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2328461438 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0714285714 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199484164348 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496002942553 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473694084621 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123363885937 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418740370559 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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