Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In modern days life is so complicating and it gradually proliferates its complications in various aspects. Personally I agree with the opinion that it is necessary for young people to have the ability to plan and organize things that appear in life. I feel this way because of the following reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, if people are not capable of plan and organize, they will not shine in life. Life is so complex in every way and if people do not have the ability to plan everything it is difficult for them to compensate. People are facing too many problems in their life and it demands them to handle the situation in a practical mind. A planned and organized person will shine in every section of life. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Four years ago, when I was a university student I did badly in my first four semesters because of a lack of organization about the class lecture, class tests and other staff. Eventually, I understood that it was the lack of planning that would hold my success. Afterward, I started to be planned and succeed in the remaining four semesters and ended up with good academic records.
Secondly, if a person is not organized then it would be deleterious for his/her career. Every company or organization demands a planned and organized employee. If anyone has the lackings then he eventually not getting his desired job. A company looking for organized employees because they have to plan about the company and their success. If a person himself is unplanned, then he will not be helpful for the company at all. My neighbor's experience is a compelling example of this. For instance, he was very unplanned and was not disciplined about his activity. When he was searching for a job and gave most of his interview with the beard and long hair and wearing unprofessional clothes, most of the company thought the person is not organized and he had no plan for his career. As a result, he got rejected by every company and his career was in question.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that every young person has to be planned and organized in their way of life. This is because it helps them to shine in life and it will help them to build a better career in their life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
In modern days life is so complicating and it graduall...
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Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mands a planned and organized employee. If anyone has the lackings then he eventua...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64778325123 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68944878221 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426108374384 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5166354286 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7727272727 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269094479734 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08765028112 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077160777248 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186617710475 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672495707442 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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