Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that in this progressive and sophisticated world, where we are living, people are preoccupied with different tasks and relaxing is necessary. There has been a controversial debate among people experiencing depression or stress as to whether spending time alone without the presence of others is a good approach to reduce stress and relax. From my perspective, being alone is not beneficial, and two reasons to support my viewpoint are presented upon hereunder.
To begin with, spending time with other individuals, we are more likely to get rid of stress. It is not a secret to anyone that humans are socialized creatures that enjoy communicating with their counterparts; in this way, human beings are able to express their emotions and feelings, which is really helpful in the process of escaping from the clutches of stress or anxiety. To put it in more vivid picture, I remember when I was a university student I used to talk to my best friend Zeynab in order to relax and reduce my stress, which was completely effective; one time she was on a trip and I could not communicate with her when I was depressed and stressed because of my low scores. Unfortunately, I had to spend my time alone, which was terrible since I could not relax since I needed to state my feelings. Had I not spent my time alone, I would not have experienced such a hard time by myself. As you can see, we will be more likely to be successful in getting rid of stress if we are not alone because it is human nature to be in touch and communicate with other people.
Furthermore, doing this, spending our time alone, we cannot take the advantage of others' advice. It is crystal clear that different people have different opinions and although we are being considered as intellectual creatures, we do not know every little thing. Talking to friends or parents will helps us to look the world from other point of views which is interesting since we will be inform of novel notions that can help us to reduce stress. Advice during depression or relaxing period is helpful since we find that we are not alone in our problems and we can get out of our comfort zones. For instance, if we inform a person who is worried about her or his final exams about our personal insecurities and experience, we probable are able to reduce their stress since she know that she is not alone. No longer will people have difficulty coping with stress when they are aware that they are not alone.
In sum, not only will people are able to take the advantage of different advice and experience, they will also reduce their stress quickly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 251, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...eople experiencing depression or stress as to whether spending time alone without the presenc...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...ing. Talking to friends or parents will helps us to look the world from other point o...
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Line 3, column 777, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'knows'.
Suggestion: knows
...e able to reduce their stress since she know that she is not alone. No longer will p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, really, so, as to, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 15.1003584229 238% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2170.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 462.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69696969697 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66498653993 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471861471861 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 696.6 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.6427120661 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.625 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.875 20.6045352989 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204228180384 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768280730554 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445414411958 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128360267514 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606674546645 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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