Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position
Learning a foreign language is a great notion for people as it will always be helpful at some point in life. In my opinion, I agree with the statement that children should start learning other language as soon as they start school. I feel this way for the following reason which I will explore in the subsequent essay.
To begin with, children can easily learn which means it creates many opportunities in future. Children brains are like empty slate so they can readily absorb inforamtion and can learn other language. It is very useful for them to make a better career. To exemplify, at our work place my friend got promoted to work as manager in the office located in the france. This is because she was very good at french and she can communicate fluently in it. She was selected for this high because she is bilingual.
In addition, learning foreign language provides an opportunity to study at a better place. A person who knows more than one language can survive in different country. This is because they can able to communicate in their native language. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I started my school from kindergarten we were taught another language English. Mostly all courses I studied in school, colleges and university were learned in English language. Therefore, I m very good at english beside my native language. When I applied to for masters in the University of Willimington, I got admission because I secured superb score in English language exam. This would not have been possible if I have never studied foreign language since childhood. Consequently, it is very advantageous to be bilingual and children should start learning foreign language as soon as they begin school.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that young people should begin learning foreign language a soon as they start school. This is because, children can easily learn other language which is better for their career, and because learning a foreign language provides opportunity to study in another foreign country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, therefore, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97953216374 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69812070525 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485380116959 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3713571218 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0952380952 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61904761905 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315271569228 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103873459264 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122021765733 0.0737576698707 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231743771307 0.150856017488 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951729227338 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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