In today's faced-paced and technology world, having a university degree plays a vital role in everybody's life, as well as orienting our thoughts and aims. A controversial question regarding this issue is whether university degree is momentous for an employee to thrive in his or her life as well as company or otherwise. Some people believe that getting a university degree leads to make progress and will be open-minded in a social communication and also in a company that has been employed, whereas others disagree. I am of the opinion that; obtaining a university degree is so significant for every companies for flourishing and also creating new things for some reasons. In ensuing lines, I will address the most discernible reasons.
First and foremost, having university degree for employees in a company cause that they have high knowledge about what they are doing. In fact, the degree leads to extend view of the employee at her or his work, so the employee could be creativity at work which it is so important for prosperous of the company. One of company in my small town, for instance, at first, utilized some employees for a work, thus after a while the company had any progress. Therefore, in charge of the company decided to induce employees to get a university degree related to their what they are doing. Consequently, after some years the employees would have been master in their work, and the company could have been made a big progress in its history. As you can see, getting a university degree leads to the employee obtain high knowledge about their works.
Another noteworthy aspect that should be reflected in this explanation is that a university degree causes to enhance confidence of employees of a company in society and community. Needless to say, a person who has a university degree, has an especial place between individuals, so this leads to boost confidence. Thus, the outcome of this thing might be exploited as increasing e.g., in selling the company's products, and beneficial economic for the company. To illustrate this, I would like to mention to my uncle at his work, when he was employed in a programming company, he did not any high university degree, so his incoming also was low and he was so depressed about this issue. Therefore, one day he decided to get a university degree related to his job, so he went to a local university, after two years he could obtain a university degree. This happening not only causes to enhance his incoming, but also leads to get a prestige in our family as well as in our small community. This experience taught me that having a university degree can rise confidence as well as salary for everybody.
In light of these crucial reasons, I have strictly come to believe that getting a university degree causes to make progress for a company. Given the above, having university degree not only can get a high knowledge at his or her own work, but also leads to increase confidence. That is why I believe that university degree is so momentous for everyone in order to orient to his or her life and thoughts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'big progress'.
Suggestion: big progress
...k, and the company could have been made a big progress in its history. As you can see, getting...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'high knowledge'.
Suggestion: high knowledge
...ving university degree not only can get a high knowledge at his or her own work, but also leads ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, e.g., first, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2560.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 532.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81203007519 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78908353067 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.421052631579 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 833.4 618.680645161 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.9752191708 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.904761905 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238992026137 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091746788318 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04675975035 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164694731388 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350125987582 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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