Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Competition among friends always has a negative effect on their friendship.
Friendships require works. They do not just materialize and maintain themselves and they do not build on a foundation of convenience, either. They take time, patience and two people who are willing to put in the efforts. Various points of view which are germane to the matter being discussed brings us to the moot question as to whether competition among friends has deleterious effects on their friendship. However, the popular sentiment to which I vehemently cling is that competition not only can foster a sense of learning but also can patronize people to become familiar with different views. The underlying aim of this essay is to put forward some cogent reasons to shed light on a number of issues in this framework.
To commence with, friends have always tried to share their ideas and go through discussion in order to gain much useful and helpful information. Generally phrased, competition for sharing ideas and opinions will provide an opportunity for people to become acquainted with various ideas and view life differently. As a palpable example, last time at the university in my hometown, vast majorities of my close friends discussed around different topics like education, economy, politic, sports and so forth. This meeting provided fertile ground for students to gain loads of information whether agree or disagree. To elucidate more on this issue, competition among friends not only can help people broaden their horizon but also can help them to learn thoroughly and meticulously. So, they could put much information into practice in order to become a self-sufficient person.
Another equally salient point in corroborating my stance is that competition will encourage people to improve their social skills. If we take a minute to ponder over it, these kinds of competitions could help people become familiar with each other and socialize. For instance, myriads of people spend their precious time in solitude. But enter a competition will arouse them to get to know different people with diverse attitudes and passions. It can be deduced from a combination of breadth of coverage and depth of detail that competition among friends not only can prevent negative effects on friendship but also can improve the circle of our friendship.
However, every coin has two sides. Many people might disagree in a competition, so it might have ruinous effects on friendship owing to the fact that nowadays, vast majorities of people are likely to persist on their own ideas without taking other opinions into consideration. In this situation, hardly can friendships lasting because there are too many disagreements and discontent in a group. However, it was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are more reasonable grounds that can lend weight to my personal perspective.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2391.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22052401747 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88345624249 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539301310044 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 741.6 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6632622142 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.681818182 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.59090909091 5.45110844103 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251382632954 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635676881406 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593668446353 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122292173987 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734274451999 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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