Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The decisions that people make quickly are always wrong. Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
Because life fully depends on what we decide every day, an ability of decision making is the most crucial one. However, even though it always occurs, no one is professional at decision making. Also, some people concerned that the sudden decision is always wrong while others strongly disagree with it. From my sight, regardless of everyday life requires from us to make sudden decisions in trivial things, it has numerous negative impacts.
To begin with, the sudden decisions do not provide us with enough time to analyze all the possible solutions that could succeed. As a result, the unexpected trouble always appears when everything goes smoothly through the plan. As an illustration, when I was applied to the scholarship of summer program which is the sudden decision, I chosen the topic and wrote the essay only for thirty minutes. Obviously, I did not accept the permission to get a scholarship while the sixty percent of the applicants have a chance to receive it. At first, I was pretty confident for me because I am one of the best essay writers among my classmates but after all, I saw the topic that I chose is not related to the ones that program allowed. Moreover, because the sudden decisions are not reliable, it does not appeal to people that much.
Another disadvantage of the sudden decision is, most of it directly depends on the emotion of that time and the surroundings. When people have a temporary emotion, they cannot control themselves which drives the decision to the wrong path. For instance, the fighting is the ideal example of the sudden decision that triggered by the emotion. Besides, people really take care of what impression they leave for the people who surround them. Some of them decide the way that shows them cool for others even though how much negative impacts it has. For example, most people prefer to wear thin clothes even though it is cold outside because it seems it makes them cool. As a result, the person can get flu and other diseases.
All in all, the sudden decisions made every second wherever in the world, it has a great disadvantages for the people who do it. Also, the cons of making decisions quickly considerably outweigh its pros.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, while, after all, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83068783069 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.523288134 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537037037037 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1519375528 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1052631579 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8947368421 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42105263158 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188460129374 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631680506356 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548071921991 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125816361527 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385968599442 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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