Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In current modern world, the bond between family member and relative is weakening. this circumstance is due to sevral reasons like technology, economical situation and extensive modification in notions. In this essay, I will support these reason with more details and examples.
To begin with, technology is one of the main reasons that by enhancement of it is going to weaken the relations between family. nowadays, there are too many products like the smart phones which introduce abundant applications that addict us. To make an example, when you are at ceremony or resturaunt at ongoing generation, you will observe most of the people are working with their smartphone and do not communicate with the others. Therfore, such kind of behaviour is going to reduce the affection between family members and make it less crucial for each member.
Secondly, mundane economics and job opportunities is raising and enriching which each family members can support their own lives. however, In the past, families rely on each member for survival due to lack of food or inappropriate life conditions. extended families is the way that they are going to withstand these conditions. The other reason which can be related to economy is urbanism. By broadening cities and urbans, more job opportunities are created and extensive life choices will introduce and many people will migrate from small towns and villages to city then the extended family which is vital in suburban life will become less important than before.
Finally, tranform in the notion is another enormous effect which cause the family members to disperse. For example, In past, people lived with their grandparents or their parent due to some traditional beliefs and assume that acting contradictory will be rude and impolite. however, nowadays by evaporating such conventions and traditions, people are try to be independant at certain age and seprate from their family to have their own life which these kind of notions will reduce the bond between family members and make extended families less effective in the social lives.
In a nutshell, in our modern world, people are going to have seprate lives from their family members and this circumstance is because of several main reasons which can be factor in as enhancement of technology, economical conditions, urbanism, and vital alter in people notions and way of thinking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28051948052 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73245765639 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490909090909 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.9513619035 48.9658058833 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0625 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0625 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14739566509 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544460167697 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274686433373 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883918080124 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301037133492 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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