Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better for people to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, instead of staying in their home communities for their whole lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems, Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In our contemporary world, communication and information flourished by the expansion of the world wide web, the internet. The internet allows us to access diverse information which could contain important context or harmful ones. The question which factors is that having high access to the internet is devastating or not. In my opinion, the internet have much higher benefits relative to its harms, moreover, I will describe my opinion by three reasons in the following essay.
The first and most important reason is that the internet makes communication a lot easier than before. Decades ago, communicating between different cities of a country was agitating and bothersome. However, nowadays, you can contact a person in another country, on the other side of the world in a fraction of a second by clicking a simple button. Furthermore, there are several applications developed according to this purpose. These programs can be Youtube, facebook, Instagram, etc. The primary purpose of programs and policies of their organization is to make people around the world closer together.
Another reason can be incredibly impactful for the growth of knowledge and science in the world. Recently, different companies like facebook and google have developed various algorithms for accumulating diverse information of their users and utilize them in different subjects in order to enhance. On the other hand, the process of learning and online courses have become very prominent, and they eliminate the frustration of learning a different thing in various institutes also it reduces the expenses.
The final reason which makes the internet more advantageous harmful is due to the users. users are the people who decide to use the internet appropriately or not. there are abundant websites that teach you how to misuse it, and access to the private information of the other users. moreover, plenty of sites invite you to do unethical deeds. it is all based on the user. Therefore, it is the user who manages how to utilize the internet and keep himself to not going after the unethical matters.
In a nutshell, I want to summarize that the internet provides us many abilities which are based on our self to utilize them, functional skills like publishing our knowledge and communicating with eclectic people and diverse cultures, or misuse the unethical and inappropriate subjects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33157894737 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89858595767 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539473684211 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6892537653 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.3 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103810510171 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286534077121 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313500814373 0.0737576698707 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0542466279354 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314364514294 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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