Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

The issue at hand is whether giving examples is the most effective teaching approach. The issue is difficult because the teaching process is individual and some people like learning when they make their own mistakes and prefer applying their knowledge in practice. I believe teaching students by giving them good examples is a good option because it can let students understand what the teacher is talking about.

Presenting information to the students with the help of examples is preferable because it makes the material more realistic. when the teacher gives a lecture accompanying it with instances of different notions and phenomena, students are able to understand it more clearly by remembering the details. I believe that teaching by supplying the content by examples is the best option because it allows students to memorize necessary information.

Additionally, teaching by example is better because it encourages students to share their experiences with others. they can provide their classmates with their own examples because they have more knowledge in it. I believe teaching by giving examples is the best option because students become more creative and open up to their schoolfellows about their involvement in different life situations.

Based on the fact that educating by giving examples is the right choice because it helps learners realise how they should behave in difficult situations described by the teachers. it happens that students don’t know how to apply the first medical aid but if they are taught by practical instances they are sure not to be confused when they need to do it in their real life. Finally, I think giving examples when teaching is the right choice because such an education method helps students not to make mistakes and conduct themselves in a proper way in a complicated state of affairs.

Ultimately, I feel that training by supplying the material with examples is the correct one. I believe this because it makes an education process easier and closer to reality.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, i feel, i think, talking about

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24846625767 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77163662637 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475460122699 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4507517782 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.214285714 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0908197873386 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446746619391 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280784410776 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642480940849 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234702254053 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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