Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It's a waste of money for the government to fund space travel or space exploration.
Properly balancing the budget to develop basic infrastructures of the society is a formidable challenge for every government in power. In some cases, the government may be inclined to spend money on space exploration typically considered superfluous from public opinion. Therefore, when it comes to the issue whether funding space travel or space exploration is a waste of money for the government, different people adopt different attitudes toward this issue depending on their characters and educational backgrounds. On the one hand, there are people who strongly believe the government can spend such money to conspicuously improve medical, educational, recreational and public facilities of the society and on other hand, others believe spending money to explore space has outstanding merits. As a graduate student who has studied cosmology, the latter carries further weight since not only does it result in further technological and industrial advancements, worthwhile to improve the quality of life on the Earth but also does it change our notion regarding the universe and our life broadening our horizon.
Conquering the space has generally been accompanied by significant industrial and technological advancements which humankind could never accomplish or if they did, it would take long time without thinking of stepping on other planets. In fact, humankind thought of finding a way to be able to maintain required food for a long journey deep inside the space leads into discovering how to efficiently pack the food, what are artificial preservative substances and under which condition foods will remain healthier. As a matter of fact, the advancement in food packaging helps human to transport foods over vast distances as economic objectives or to aid their counterparts in remote areas. Moreover, thinking of inventing a particular shuttle which can travel in space for longer distances has resulted in noticeable advancements in airplane industry whereby a variety of advanced airplanes and jets are nowadays available not only for public transportation but also for defending territory. Subsequently, space exploration will profoundly influence on human life providing further industrial and technological advancements.
Space traveling accomplishments has greatly changed the ways people think about their surroundings. There were people who thought humankind is the only intelligent creature in the universe, therefore, made their selves stand out from other creatures and gave their selves the right to think of controlling not only the Earth but also whole universe in the future. However, space achievements regarding how gigantic our universe is and the possibility of the existence of aliens which may even be more intelligent than human changed their notion not to be so selfish. To me as student familiar with cosmological concepts, humankind living on the Earth will not play an important role in the fate of universe since they are wholly just as a dot on a blank page. Furthermore, space travelling may uplift barriers and give humankind the opportunities to discover the origin of the life by discovering the origin of the cosmic in its entirety. Personally, I am convincing which universe may be a smart creature as whole and the Earth including all human play just the role of one cell in body of such smart creature. Hence, more space travelling will help us to obtain a philosophical view regarding the universe we are living in.
To wrap it up, conquering space by humankind not only bring about noticeable developments in industry and technology but also give us a panoramic view of how the universe is evolving. Furthermore, human activities are harming environment in such a way which we may need to discover a planet similar to Earth and provide necessities for living there in near future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, while, in fact, as a matter of fact, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 86.0 52.1666666667 165% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3237.0 1977.66487455 164% => OK
No of words: 603.0 407.700716846 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36815920398 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9554069778 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08821804057 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 294.0 212.727598566 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487562189055 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1036.8 618.680645161 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4618562777 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.368421053 100.406767564 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7368421053 20.6045352989 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.10526315789 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199884904619 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678859927533 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561516966815 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119804457155 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541683902138 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 11.7677419355 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 58.1214874552 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.1575268817 163% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 86.8835125448 183% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.247311828 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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