do you agree or disagree with the following statement? most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are
Advertising is the most effective way of introducing a product to the people of societies. Many forms of advertising are involved, and each has a particular purpose to attract the attention of a customer. However, a controversial question which is often raised regarding the issue that the most number of advertisements tend to exaggerate about their products or not has provoked a controversy among people. I to a considerable extent hold the view point that almost every advertisement tries to conceal some drawbacks of a product and overstate regular advantages.
To commence with, most advertisers to compete with other commodities, they tend to distort many of their audience. This way they can survive competing their rivals. Unless a company shows that their product is of pleasant quality, they will most likely lose customers. It also should be taken into account that, if a company should fail to meet their customer’s expectations, not only they will lose loyal customers but also the new ones. Despite the fact that most companies are determined to improve their product quality, they are bound to describe their goods as competitive as others just to stay in business.
The second equally significant reason for this assertion is concerned with the fact that most advertising industries try to target the sense of temptation in humans. By disclosing a higher and better significance of a product, which most of their products do not possess, they are capable of deceiving people and talk them into buying their merchandise. Take a well and also a thoughtful organized commercial advertisement for example. Many children and even adults after watching an impressive show, are persuaded to purchase the product. Sometimes, some people despite their desires are convinced to buy a product that they might even have no need for it.
To wrap up, according to the aforementioned reasons which are mainly about attracting more costumers and the ability to stay in the market, advertisements tend to introduce their goods of more quality than it already is. Governments should supervise such advertisements because people deserve to apprehend what they have paid for.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, second, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2664756447 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01201061515 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570200573066 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9260971502 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.875 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8125 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227864065912 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082964421444 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479146728775 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138798901042 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351835375527 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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