Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Being successful can be perceived in many ways according to different personalities. No one can deny that possessing a high incomes can be equal to success, however in my opinion earning a lot of money doesn't have paramount meaning of success. I will explain why i feel this way in the following essay.
First and foremost, people convert everything what they attain into money and this promptly increase their confidence and pride. We can not denote that as a success, if you don't have compassion and moral in turns of others. If you want to consider your actions as breakthrough or achievement in some field, they not only have to provide you money but also to have a positive effect on society's daily basis. Out of question is that contribution toward others is more valuable than any endeavors, which can ameliorate only your life.
Moreover, you can not be truly happy regardless of the amount of gold or money you own. Don't you feel better if you make someone's life easier or create something that has been needed? A few days ago I came across on one interview with a young 27 years old man who can be compelling example of successful person. He revamped a digital platform which shows to an ambulance's driver in where is the closest hospital with available rooms for people with severe emergency cases. What is important that he didn't take the advantage of this to earn money and as a result the platform is working for free in whole country of Bulgaria. Therefore he earned the love and respect of many people and demonstrated what is the meaning of success.
In conclusion, not only the people who can brag with their huge bank accounts can identify themselves as successful. Others who devise something that helps people is not for commercial need, therefore they don't look for money. Also the emotional effect and the way how they feel, when know their work helped many individuals is vital and will last forever.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7380952381 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58757469466 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577380952381 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.592869053 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242914829403 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767361780484 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034759351166 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141805116562 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345337323248 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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