Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people agree that parents are the best teachers for their offspring. They cite the children’s will learn bad things from the parents to disagree this point. However, I strongly agree with these people and believe that parents are the best teachers to provide advantages for the children. I will support my viewpoint with two reasons.
First of all, parents as a teacher will positively impact the actions of children’s because of parents they can teach how to respect elders peoples and how to talk with person, this will influence their children. For example, when children start going school, then they will respect their teacher and they will interact with their classmates and make friends. It is important for parents to teach these social skills things to their young children is because they are able to be influenced at such a young age. Their brain are still developing and it is important that they see positive reinforcement of good social skills as often as possible. Thus, parents are the best teacher.
Second, parents as a teacher will positively impact the actions of children’s because of parents they can teach how to be mentally prepared in any circumstances and young children will also learn from observing parents movements like how they eat, play, talk and many good behaviors. So parents are the best teacher and children first learn from them all the habits. Their brain are still developing and it is important that they see positive reinforcement of good behaviors as often as possible. Thus, parents are the best teacher.
To conclude, the issue of whether parents are the best teacher is complex. Some have suggested that parents are not best teachers because young children’s learn bad behaviors from parents. Nevertheless, I still contend that parents are the best teachers for children and that they have wholly encouraging effect on their behavior.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the best'.
Suggestion: not the best
...x. Some have suggested that parents are not best teachers because young children’s learn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, nevertheless, second, so, still, then, thus, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12861736334 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5785576158 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 212.727598566 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.405144694534 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8048783401 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6875 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193261399477 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112666109915 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753624587717 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162074943037 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573192674307 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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