Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Parents' interest in children's education has fluctuated throughout the history. The notion that parents' involvement in their children's education is more than ever is a fascinating one and one that I believe in. In the following paragraphs I will put forth my arguments to support my opinion.
First and foremost, education is more demanding nowadays. Ever-increasing competition among students for achieving success and entering more prestigious universities, or high-income jobs forced education toward becoming harsh and rigorous. As a result, parents' interference in children's education is inevitable. By only taking information, guidance, and advise from their parents, can children venture forth toward success. Take me as an example. If it were not for my father who helped me with chemistry through the highschool, I would have probably failed the subject several times.
Moreover, another remarkable aspect of parents increased help with children's education is that parents today are virtually more educated than before. More people are attending college and higher education today, therefore, they have a wider range of knowledge in a variety of fields. For this reasons, they are more likely to be familiar with their children's subject, thereby, they can provide help of greath value. For instance, a person with a master of engineering degree is probably an adroit person who have a diversity of knowledge and experience in many basic subject of science and mathematics. Consequently this person is able to help his or her children in any desired subject.
Admiteddly, not to mention the effects of technology on parents' contribution in children's education would be an oversight. All this technology, specifically the renowned "Internet", brings about a great number of opportunities for parents to help their children regarding their education. In this respect, if a parent does not know about a particular subject, she can search on the internet conveiniently, and obtain adequate knowledge in order to be able to help her children. Furthermore, numerous gadgets, such as tablets, provided parents with the opportunity to follow their children's school performance from anywhere, anytime. In this regard, parents may visit school's website for this information, or they can communicate with teachers.
All in all, parents are more involved in children's education nowadays because not only education is more demanding and laborious, but also parents themselves are more educated and attain great knowledge. Also, technology plays a key-role in parents' involvement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2203.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60559796438 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14557543769 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541984732824 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7982100709 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.904761905 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90476190476 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344655798205 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111950085583 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080835218185 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213415814012 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422688111032 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 58.1214874552 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 10.9000537634 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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