Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Patience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later.
In the contemporary world, we have sorunded by a lot of tasks and on the other hand always time is not enough to do the best. So momentoues is for us to have a strategy to deal with this complexe situation, that the connroversial question arises here that we should be patient or take action now than later, As far as I am concerned, I agree with that taking action now and making quick decisions is better nowadays. I elaborate on my reasons in the following paragraphs.
The first resaon I want to point out is that by taking action now that later you can save your time and your chance of achieving the goals. It would be an asset for anyone who choose the strategy of choosing the patient, but sometime we need to choose the other side of pationt which is taking risks and action at the moment. Always we tend to take the strategy of being pationt and this is becasue of avoiding of rendering swift decitions, so it would a safe option for us. Accordingly we have to be careful to not obtain our goals later, because may be there is not the again chance later. Moreover, when you are making decisions without patient, you have not be concern about failer, because there will be different ways in which you can fullfill your dreams. Hence, you can confidence that there will be another way if the end of this way is not clear.
Second, by taking action now not also can you save your time but also, you have more energy to done anything you want. Reducing the level of energy, people who choose the strategy of being patient cannot persue their goals in the best way, therefore, patient is a factor of lossing our passion. In addition, with a high level of energy we can perform our tasks faster, so this engry can give us a formation of being focous on our problems or our puposes and we will not experice the stress of waiting to make decitions later. As an example, when I was a student at the university, I decided to work with a supervisor for my thesis, then I wa able to start my projects as faster as other students who were seeking to find a approprite professor.
In conclution, Should you want to take the strategy of being patient, I suggest you to be bear and take action now than later. It gives you the chanse of saving your time without suffering the stress of wating until another time. It also gives you an opportunity to persue your goal with high energy and passion. All in all, I agree with taking actions now, beacause I live at moment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
... taking risks and action at the moment. Always we tend to take the strategy of being p...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Accordingly,
...ions, so it would a safe option for us. Accordingly we have to be careful to not obtain our...
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Line 2, column 662, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...decisions without patient, you have not be concern about failer, because there wil...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... wa able to start my projects as faster as other students who were seeking to find...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...other students who were seeking to find a approprite professor. In conclution, S...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39824945295 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36945854595 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457330415755 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0626547145 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.235294118 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8823529412 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304669619485 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109625013776 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910151177663 0.0737576698707 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230757328126 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807893861685 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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