Some people say that people can be satisfied with what they have already, while others insist that we always want something more or different. I agree with the latter opinion that we seek for the better. There are three reasons to support my claim, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
First, we always see others, such as friends, family, or even strangers on the streets, and think that they need those products too. There are always trends in fashion, food, colors. Many people would want the new trending products as they get more popular. For instance, when I was in elementary school, I used to wear what my mother bought for me without considering what people around me had. However, as I grew up, I started to understand that friends were wearing clothes that looked like clothes from magazines. Later, I asked my mother to go shopping with me and bought more fashionable clothes. Even though I still liked the clothes I already had, I was not satisfied with them and wanted new trending clothes. In short, people, especially youngsters, want what others have and get into the trends.
Second, as the technology improves so rapidly, there are always new products in the market. Companies always invent new goods that are more comfortable, convenient, and attractive so that they can keep customers. For instance, one of the largest companies, Apple, releases their new versions of phones or laptops with better camera quality, faster movement, or larger screens. The products are not so reasonable for most people, in my opinion. However, they are still so lucrative because many people still buy them regardless of the price of the updated products.
Lastly, we are never satisfied with not only the products but also ourselves. Most people want themselves to be better people every day. We study hard at school because they want to absorb knowledge and be intelligent. Most people who work out try to be fitter or healthier. For me, I have been studying English for four years to get better at it and be able to communicate well with people around the world. I believe that people have something they work hard to get better at it without satisfying with what they have.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that people are never satisfied with what they have and always want something more. This is because people always see what others have that are fascinating, companies always have the better, updated versions of products and we want ourselves to be better every day.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, look, second, so, still, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in short, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2080.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90566037736 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49604528786 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478773584906 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 625.5 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5888549809 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383312654028 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118973661975 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116693544575 0.0737576698707 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256201434637 0.150856017488 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965831545126 0.0645574589148 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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