Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many people agree to the idea that it is more meaningful to travel in their own country than travel to foreign countries. I totally disapprove it for three reasons. In foreign countries, the different cultures can refresh our spirits in a mild way. We can learn unique knowledge if we visit foreign countries. Foreign countries usually inspire people in many aspects.
Different cultures expecting to be out of our mind at times if we travel abroad. For example, travelers from North America can find out that people in South Asia have a slower life pace and a less stressful emotion commonly which is hard to feel it when the modern cities in the United States are pushing people to complete works as soon as possible. Those who constrained in a struggle life style can pack their emotions then clean up and refresh their brains in foreign countries.
There are many historical and special stories and tourist spots in foreign countries which we are not familiar with. Take Japan for example. Without heading to there, we cannot experience their food like raw chicken and stories behind it. Their raw food culture is related to their history and it is best to go there to understand it deeply.
Foreign countries inspire passengers from different lands especially for artists and literature workers. Many artworks and literature pieces were made when their owners were traveling around the world. For example, some designers from Europe obtain inspirations through visiting Chinese landscapes. Inspirations appear more frequent when people are abroad.
People benefit from traveling abroad than having an inland tour. There are many cultures, stimulus, and experiences cannot be replaced. Foreign and unfamiliar environment can inspire people. It is worthwhile for people to travel abroad and receive profits from it instead of plain tour in their own country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a mild way" with adverb for "mild"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21854304636 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55987464607 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566225165563 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.404352035 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 5.45110844103 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299310669313 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930016912736 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976781358132 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173938558083 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612298885198 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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