Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People care more about public recognition than about money. Even if no money is given, public recognition can still make people work harder.
In today's hectic city of life, in which life has trials and tribulations, vast majorities of people look for a better life. In fact, there are different points of view regarding the trend of modern lives. Various points of view which are germane to the matter being discussed brings us to the moot question as to whether human beings are looking for public recognition or money. However, the popular sentiment to which I vehemently cling is that despite public recognition, human beings have put their efforts so as to accumulate a hoard of money, since the dawn of civilization. The underlying aim of this essay is to put forward some cogent reasons to shed light on a number of issues in this framework.
To commence with, it is established beyond doubt that people make their efforts and bend over backward so as to find a well-paid and a decent job in order to guarantee their future lives. Generally phrased, although public recognition might play an important role for some people, hardly can people reach their goals without gaining money. As a tangible example, accumulate a vast sum of a budget can provide an opportunity for individuals to do everything they want or need. Nowadays, people care more about education, healthy life, luxurious house and so forth. So, not only can money help people achieve these valuable parameters but also can help them lead a successful life in their personal lives. To elucidate more on this issue, with money people have fortune and chance, so, they could build their future lives on a foundation of convenience and doubled their money by a conspicuous investment in the stock market.
Another equally salient point in corroborating my stance is that life difficulties definitely come in different forms and shapes, so, they could be painful or sweet as well, which accompany us in the whole life. If we take a minute to ponder over it, every mature human being has to admit that success will be a blank dream without difficulties. Arguably, care more about money will provide fertile ground for people to overcome those difficulties and repel any obstacle or barrier. It can be deduced from a combination of breadth of coverage and depth of detail that vast majorities of people try hard to have both public recognition and money simultaneously. But, as far as I am concerned, not only could it be a hard task to do but also it could create some problems, which distract people's attention from their lives. Therefore, many people prefer to think of money because it will bring fame as well as fortune and wealth.
However, every coin has two sides. Money is not the whole thing in the life. Somehow donate some money to the poor people is the sign of public recognition since in this way, people contribute greatly to the reduction of destitution in any given society. However, it was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are more reasonable grounds that can lend weight to my personal perspective.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, well, as for, as to, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2499.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 513.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87134502924 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68060887952 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518518518519 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 792.9 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6675641973 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.590909091 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3181818182 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291164718976 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847949430543 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739288561096 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153111070472 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913986821786 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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