Do you agree or disagree with the following statement people should sometimes do things they do not enjoy doing? Use specific reasons and answer to support your reason.
Life is not always a bed of roses, often there are thorns. Therefore, I agree with the statement that people should sometimes do things they do not enjoy doing. There are some reasons people only do things but simply not enjoy to do them.
It is difficult to produce an interest in everything or train one person in everything. Sometimes it is important to do things may they are not so enjoyable but one of an essential part of our lives. For example, wake up in the early morning, may not everyone enjoy it but what if you have to go to the office at 8 a.m. Producing interest create less trouble for us. Learning everything for a single person is not possible but sometimes we have to learn things which are not enjoyable with time.
Life often demands the thing we do which does not like to do, but perhaps it is essential. Things that will always enjoy is not always good for us. Having a Tasty junk food every day, at some point it effects on health. So, sometime enjoyable things may always not beneficial.
It nevertheless not all work and things are enjoyable. But as an adult, we have to make the work or things we are doing enjoyable, because ‘I don’t feel doing it’ will always not work. Going office daily may not enjoyable but it is important. As an adult, we have to perform both enjoyable and non-enjoyable tasks. But at this point, some people need the motivation to do things which are not enjoyable. Doing a study is maybe not enjoyable but sometimes motivation works here.
Thus, People should do things they do not enjoy, but those things essential to do. And every enjoyable thing is not always beneficial.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy doing'.
Suggestion: enjoy doing
...ns people only do things but simply not enjoy to do them. It is difficult to produce an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 295.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61016949153 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48569593598 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471186440678 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4392524211 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5789473684 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5263157895 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15789473684 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440435053608 0.236089414692 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163955720873 0.076458572812 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174601832927 0.0737576698707 237% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325353617919 0.150856017488 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166045410434 0.0645574589148 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.31 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 86.8835125448 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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