Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many people think it is a bad idea for a person to take an important decision alone. While some of them believe that people should have the power of making decision by their own, I hold the opposite view. I think people should ask experts when they tend to make an important decision in their life.
To begin with, making a significant decision alone can prevent people from struggling in their lives. Many important decisions that people make can determine their whole life. If they make the right decision they will enjoy for the rest of their life. But, when they make the wrong choice, they will suffer in their future life. Therefore, making huge decision requires people to ask some experts in order to guide them to the right way. For example, my brother Amjed made a huge mistake when he graduated from high school. He took his own decision to enter pharmacy school because he wanted to have a high salary after graduation. However, he never liked chemistry at all which is the major subject in pharmacy school, so he struggled with chemistry and he failed to pass this course three times in pharmacy school. Then, he was kicked out the school because his bad grade in chemistry course. After that, he did not find any university to accept him because he had bad university profile. Thus, he ended up sitting at home doing nothing. Obviously, my brother Amjed ruin his life by taking an important decision alone.
On the other hand, my nephew Mohammed is enjoying his life right now because he used to take his parent’s opinion before any important decision. For instance, he asked his father to give him advise before picking major to study. Therefore, his father told him to do a personality test which an online test that measure people preferences. After he did that, he choose to study art. As a result, Mohammed is enjoying his life today because he is one of the best artists in the city. Apparently, Mohammed made a perfect decision by asking people for help with his significant decision.
In conclusion, I encourage people never take an important decision alone. This is because they can risk their life by taking this critical decision.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'advice' (a noun)?
Suggestion: advice
...stance, he asked his father to give him advise before picking major to study. Therefor...
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Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'chooses'.
Suggestion: chooses
...ople preferences. After he did that, he choose to study art. As a result, Mohammed is ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 13.8261648746 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76063829787 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40812976276 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484042553191 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4937755761 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8260869565 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.347826087 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95652173913 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163906868766 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641495051232 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644906180017 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129064536199 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530388467847 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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