Some people do not want handling decisions by themselves; they always finish their duty with someone. I disagree that person should never make an important decision alone. I have two reasons which I will explore in this essay.
First of all, someday a person should decide important things by himself. Such as choosing your college or when dealing with personal chores. Under this circumstances, you can’t make that decision with anyone else. Avoiding responsibility begin with a trivial thing. For example, since I was young, I was not used to doing it alone if I register in middle school academy. I always do that with my mother. Now I regret my behavior in the past because I am not independent even I became older.
Secondly, nobody can do your responsibility. For instance, my mother choose my school and academy and I must follow what she chooses even though I do not like it. In the end who suffers about this choice? It is me not my mother. Who studies here? It is me. Therefore, I am responsible with all the consequences not other people.
In conclusion, we should make an important decision by ourselves because someday a person should decide important things by himself and other reason, nobody can take their responsibility.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: THIS_NNS
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
...hen dealing with personal chores. Under this circumstances, you can't make that...
Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to even'
Suggestion: to even
...demy and I must follow what she chooses even though I do not like it. In the end who...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 1977.66487455 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 212.0 407.700716846 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91981132075 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81041441006 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 618.680645161 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2182163373 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.9444444444 100.406767564 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.7777777778 20.6045352989 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33603216313 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930507960736 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118477879214 0.0737576698707 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212723747831 0.150856017488 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894815884967 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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