do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
providing internet access is just an important as other services, such as building roads, so government should offer intenet access to all their citizens at no cost. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Internet is indispensable part of our lives, as it is a global computer network which provides a variety of information and communication facilities. Some people believe that it is more important that internet should be free for all population while others disagree. In my view, though both sides are necessary but I believe that internet must be free of cost. In the folowing essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons of support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, we are living in the modern era where technololgy means everything to us. In our education system, students must no be charged for using the internet because they do not earn much money to afford heavy price of internet connections with their student loan. For instance, when my husband was in university he did part time job to fulfil his basic needs. In addition, that was the hardest part of his life at that time he do not have enough money to buy his network so he did his assignments by sitting outside the library after 6 PM to use free wifi of library. Thus, this example elucidates that, internet is very essential for all people.
Secondly, there are thousands of people who earn very limited amount to pay their bills. In this century, the life without internet is not possible because all insurance, bills, credits cards, everything need the access to network. For instance, few months back when I decided to travel internationally it requires my police clearance certificate so I went to police station and they told me that they are not taking any forms or application manually. Moreover, I had to fill it online and that time because of high charges I did not have the facility of internet so it became very arduous for me. Therefore, this instance elaborates that the internet have changed all ways of global society.
To warp up, in my opinion the government should give the internet to all public without taking any payment. On the basis of examples and scenarios presented above, internet is the most important part of people and it should be free especially in education and office setup.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78571428571 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6476618955 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554945054945 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7178006509 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.875 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182649542612 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058404737454 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385900697836 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111938409522 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154509533544 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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