Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? social media affected our life and ruined our relationships.
One of the most widespread technologies that completely affect our society is social media. Besides undeniable benefits, this new guest has some controversial effects on our lives. There are a variety of different perspectives on this question of whether or not the increasing usage of this technology is beneficial. I am on the side that by considering all aspects, social media has a bad effect on our life. There are three reasons why I subscribe to this idea which separately are elaborated upon hereunder.
To begin with, unlimited use of this media consumes or better to say waste lots of our time that we can allocate to more useful things. If one of these internet-addicted persons tries to measure the spent time in these activities, he will wonder. There are some good applications anyone can install on his phone and track his usage. Take a personal experience as an example; I installed one of them and surprisingly found out that I regularly use Instagram three to four hours a day. Imagine what beneficial activities can be replaced by this ridiculous surfing.
In addition, being a lot in this medium wastes your energy and enthusiasm for spending time with your beloved family. Consider a home that everyone after gets in, directly go to his virtual cave in his phone. No one talks to another to know how was his day. If family members can not state their problems at home to take wise and honest instruction, they will not solve them anywhere else. However children need to talk to their parents, the man and women also need to talk and relieve their stresses in a peaceful environment.
One more point that I can’t ignore is that people just show the positive side of their lives on social media to attain others’ admiration. Looking at this nice and charming side without a sight on negatives that of course, anyone has, may lead to a sense of dissatisfaction and complaint. Especially young persons, who are easily affected by luxurious things, are in danger of disappointment.
In conclusion, by considering the pros and cons, I don’t recommend being engaged in social media without limitation. This time-wasting monster ruins your personal and family relations, also kills your feeling of contentment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ferent perspectives on this question of whether or not the increasing usage of this technology...
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Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...they will not solve them anywhere else. However children need to talk to their parents,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, look, may, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96266666667 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88465549647 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602666666667 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.3592488512 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.05 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144952721983 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457989770829 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721833913382 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801045565804 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633943035215 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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