It is obvious that in today’s fast-paced world humans have access to various media such as TV, Internet, newspaper, and so on in order to get the required information about different issues. Thus, these media play a crucial role in people’s life, and it is important for them to provide accurate and reliable new for individuals. I believe that today the media are more worried about the precision and correctness of news than the past. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss my view using some reasons and examples.
I think nowadays, with the development of technology, people have access to diverse news resources in order to be aware of different issues. Thus, if they face some inaccurate news when they are using one of these media, they will never utilize that medium and will prefer to get their required information from other media. In other words, the media are trying to present accurate and correct news in order to attract their users; otherwise, they will their fans and followers. For example, in my country, TV news programs often censor their news and do not broadcast the detalis of news and thus I and most of the people prefer to pursue the news through other resources such as the Internet.
Moreover, I believe that nowadays more persons are using these media and individuals are dependent on these media more than the past. If they give people some inaccurate news, it will cause some problem for people. As a result, it is their duty to provide precise and real news for people because it will have major effects on people’s life. for instance, in my country, some resources on the Internet announced that one of the famous actors had died in a terrible accident; therefore, it would lead his family to be concern about his, and his mother became faint. Consequently, different media are responsible for their information due to the fact that it is possible that it causes some troubles and problems for individuals.
To sum up, in my point of view, nowadays the media are more concerned about their news because more people are using them in comparison to the past in order to gain their necessary information. That is, they relied to these media more than the past owing to the advancement of the technology. In addition, they have access to various media, and if they receive incorrect news from them, they will not use it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: For
...ve major effects on people's life. for instance, in my country, some resources...
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...t news from them, they will not use it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, as a result, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1969.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82598039216 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60076507945 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448529411765 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.5222195407 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0625 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274275060746 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104463736344 0.076458572812 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541621331516 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185495938543 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194005496427 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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