Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Since the advent of civilization and complex societies, the education plays a key role in the success of every society and consequently teachers are of great importance. But how the societies appreciate and value their teachers is always a metter of controversy. As well as the cherishing of tutors is concerned, some are of the opinion that teachers are more valuable for people nowadays than they were in the past, while others believe otherwise. I-for one- subscribe to the first idea on the ground that today education is more important, parents care much more about their children, and teaching is a more demanding job than it used to be.
First of all, As I mentioned before, education is one the crucial facets of thriving societies. In todays modern world with its galloping progress, countries need to keep the pace and therefore they need put more investment on their education systems. So, the teachers as the heart of these essential systems, are of considerable importance. Authorities know that they should value the teachers to guaranee the future of the country. They understand that cherished teachers can be more effective in the upbringing of next generation and leading the country to flourish.
Secondly, nowadays parents care about their kids much more than they did in the past. As a result, they value the teachers more than old days. Parents know that teachers have immense impact on the future of their childern, so they always have more respect for them and take their advice into consideration. For instance, my sister always go to the parent-teacher meetings and sometimes invite my nephew's teachers to her house to consult with them. Moreover, she gives them some gift on special occasions because the thinks that teachers can significantly help her child to be successful.
Lastly, unlike the old days, teaching is now an expertise which needs much more educational background. consider teachers in the past as an example, they did not need an academic bacground to fit in the job. But, now teachers go to the college and try hard to acquire the prerequisites of this career. Therefore, this job needs highly expert people and is of great value.
All in all, i do believe that teachers are more appreciated nowadays, because, society and parents know the their value, and also the job needs more sophisticated people. The time of ignorance has passed and countries understand the value of their teachers better than the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2054.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02200488998 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73570861049 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508557457213 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5073094503 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.7 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.45 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265903455885 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915014718502 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640146297411 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163003218645 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596700773988 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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