Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Throughout history, teachers have played a crucial role in nurturing people’s mind. They have taught them various valuable lessons to enable them to live a better life. In this regard, some people possess the conviction that people valued teacher more in the past. I personally subscribe to the idea that nowadays, people don’t revere teachers like past. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
First and foremost, due to the huge advancements of the technology, people have more access to online course, which means that they are not in desperate need of teachers to learn new thing. In other words, online course provides them with the golden opportunities to learn new skills that are necessary to land a money-making job. Therefore, in view of the fact that they are capable of enabling themselves with required skills, they don’t respect teachers like before. It is no denying the fact that the less people need others, the less they look up to them. My own experience is a case in point. When I was a student, the technology was not available compared with today. Thus, students were dependent on their teachers to be able to learn new skills. As times elapsed, after graduation, I chose teaching as my professional career. What I have seen is that today, students don’t care about their teacher and don’t come to class because they enroll in online courses to learn new and practical skills. This experience makes it evident to me that now that they don’t need their teacher like past, they don’t care about them.
The second noteworthy reason to be mentioned is that today, thanks to the governments’ support, more teachers are available than before. It goes without saying that in the past there were a small number of teachers in every city, and not all students were able to enroll in schools. Hence, due to the smaller number of teachers and educational facilities, people were in a constant competition to have a chance to be capable of being taught by teachers. In the research conducted in my country in 2020, the factors that affected people’s opinion on teachers’ status in the society were analyzed. The results revealed that one of the most important factors was the number of teachers in the society. To put it simply, there was a negative and strong correlation between the number of teacher and the amount of the people who pay attention to them. According to this study, since there are more teachers in the society now than before, people don’t feel that they are valuable, nor do they respect them enough.
In short, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that teachers are not appreciated like past. Not only do students have access to a large number of online courses, but also there are more teacher available in the society than before, both of which lead to less respect for them. However, that was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are other examples and reasons which are not mentioned above. Finally, it is suggested that people try to revere teachers because they paly a pivotal role in cultivating students’ abilities and talents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 505, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ore. It is no denying the fact that the less people need others, the less they look ...
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Line 2, column 799, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to teach'.
Suggestion: to teach
...imes elapsed, after graduation, I chose teaching as my professional career. What I have ...
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Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...hout saying that in the past there were a small number of teachers in every city, and not all stu...
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Line 4, column 148, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...st. Not only do students have access to a large number of online courses, but also there are more...
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Line 4, column 206, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'teachers'?
Suggestion: teachers
...online courses, but also there are more teacher available in the society than before, b...
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Line 4, column 557, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vating students’ abilities and talents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, look, second, so, therefore, thus, in short, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 93.0 52.1666666667 178% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2659.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 539.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9332096475 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81833721656 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62654077522 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 811.8 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7356893209 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.269230769 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7307692308 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237908256389 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694865782716 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481136498495 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158471837919 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400198667432 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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