Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In a team, those who do not accept others’ criticism cannot succeed.
In today's hectic city of life, in which life has trials and tribulations vast majorities of people look for a better life without obstacles and barriers. Indeed, there are various points of view regarding modern life and human beings bend over backward to be successful in their personal lives. Various points of view which are germane to the matter being discussed bring us to the moot question as to whether if people do not comply with others' opinions, they will not be able to succeed. However, the popular sentiment to which I vehemently cling is that human beings have to participate in different groups and take various criticisms into consideration if they want to become successful. The underlying aim of this essay is to put forward some cogent reasons to shed light on a number of issues in this framework.
To commence with, life difficulties definitely come in different forms and shapes, so, they can be sweet or painful as well. Among these problems, people make their efforts and try hard so as to lead a successful life. Generally phrased, become familiar with the various point of view in the different team, not only can help people consider a wide variety of ideas but also it can help to make the best and a sound decision. As a palpable example, based on a survey conducted by the prominent university in my hometown, a plethora of people who preferred to hear different criticisms in a group, were more likely to make a progress day in day out because criticisms made them not to be gullible toward any fact they received. So, they have become successful after considering various perspectives. To elucidate more on this issue, being criticized provide fertile ground for people to view life differently and broaden their horizon. Therefore, it helps them to think thoroughly and deeply toward any issue and not to do something wrong.
Another equally salient point in corroborating my stance is that other criticism in a group will provide an opportunity for people to become familiar with other people's view with diverse attitudes and passions. If we take a minute to ponder over it, ideas, different views, criticism and so forth, are the fundamental elements of being a successful person. Arguably, if people want to succeed, it is necessarily needed to take criticism into account. It can be deduced from a combination of breadth of coverage and depth of detail that not only will criticism patronize individuals to gain a conspicuous success but also it will support people to enhance their social activities. However, every coin has two sides. There is no guarantee of success if people take criticism into consideration. In fact, people ideas and opinions might not be logical and wise enough to help people succeed. For instance, human beings should try to rely on their own knowledge and experience in order to make an impressive progress and guarantee their success. However, it was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are more reasonable grounds that can lend weight to my personal perspective.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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... of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 85.0 52.1666666667 163% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2576.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 518.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97297297297 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76369404967 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509652509653 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 818.1 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6614278919 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.090909091 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105124056877 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324142647411 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375043188592 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0576462201476 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342456612744 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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