No one can deny that today's media such as TV, magazines, radio, and so on, play a paramount role in our modern lives.
In my point of view, I would agree that media provides a vast quantity of information, but most individuals do not use this information to completely comprehend a subject.
I feel this way for several causes, which I will explore in greater detail in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, some individuals take advantage of the huge diversity of news channels and different newspapers to know the outlines of the events taking place in the world because the majority of media channels are now biased and have their own agenda.
As a result, many people have lost faith in the news and information provided by these outlets.
Drawing from what happened in Syria during the war, there were many news channels to report what was happening in the area moment by moment, but it was very clear that all of these news channels were biased and rarely until people find a reliable source that gave the complete picture of what was going on.
Therefore, mass media has a tangible impact if people know truly how to follow it.
To continue, Subscribing to some educational or news channels that provide distinctive content and differ from the rest of the channels is costly and not available for everyone.
Thus, knowledge is limited to a certain group of individuals.
To illustrate this, some of these channels, for example, that show vital information like history, astronomy, or climate change, only show one interesting episode from an entire series.
You need to pay to subscribe to this channel in order to see the complete series.
As a result, knowledge is restricted to a small group of people.
From what I have deliberated above, I reckon that this is an essential topic to discuss because it occupies a large space in our lives. I would stand with people who regard today's media as an untrustworthy source of information that does not allow them to learn something adequately.
This is due to the absence of neutrality as well as restrictions on some reliable sources that stand in the way of reaching that goal.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, i feel, i reckon, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83739837398 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67529779521 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563685636856 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9671229452 48.9658058833 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.53405017921 309% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197669815576 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627302034687 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547997352317 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0622381023499 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524700325485 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.