Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today's world it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Working quickly and risking making mistakes or work slowly and cautiously is a hot debated issue today. On one hand, some people may say working quickly and boldly can bring more opportunities. On the other hand, some people say that working carefully can prevent companies from losing clients. To me, I believe the former one is more important than the latter one, for the following reasons.
First of all, nowadays, the Internet has brought convenience to companies when they are looking for clients. Since they can easily extract potential clients' information from the Internet, they do not need to use the traditional ways, such as attending exhibitions, to find potential buyers. But the development of the Internet also brings more competitors to a company, so working quickly appears to be more essential than before. For example, when I worked as a sales before, my boss always told me to increase the speed of sending quotation to buyers, or other people may take away those clients. Because the Internet allows them to negotiate with multiple suppliers at the same time, and speeding up the whole process could bring us more chances to discuss about clients' demand.
Secondly, risking making mistakes allows people to innovate. Since innovation is very imperative today, almost all of the successful companies have to risk making mistakes. For instance, Apple, which is a leading company in technology industry. They often made decisions that were risky and radical. Such as cancelling the port for headset on iPhone and USB ports on MacBook. All these decisions used to brought a lot of negative responses from customers, yet later on, these decisions became leading trends in this industry, which made a lot of competitors try to emulate them.
However, some people may argue that working slowly and making sure that everything is correct could prevent a company from losing customers. Although this argument does make sense, if a company spends too much of attention on making sure that everything is correct, they may not even have the opportunity to communicate with potential customers. Because companies that are more efficient have caught customers' attention, and once they made it, they have time to slowly debug their products.
To conclude, despite making sure that everything is correct is still important, without efficiency, a company may not have chance to talk to customers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'clients'' or 'client's'?
Suggestion: clients'; client's
...Since they can easily extract potential clients information from the Internet, they do ...
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Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...vation is very imperative today, almost all of the successful companies have to risk makin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2025.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19230769231 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64122603173 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9590929757 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.578947368 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5263157895 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26315789474 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266396943976 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876453646138 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087646631332 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151342867038 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651951862237 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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