Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that in today’s progressive world where we live, each individual has a special duty in any companies and it is essential that how they responsible to work correctly in order to obtain the best result in the careers. There is a debate among human resource managers that, the only key to should consider when the companies decide to recruit employees, is how the employees can work quickly. I hold the view that, working accurately without considering the speed of doing, is the most crucial point which we notice that. The reasons to support my idea are illustrated in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, it is no secret to anyone that, if you work carefully, it makes you to prevent make the mistake. Then, it is going to achieve the best outcome. Therefore, each company try to aware of that who is the person can gain the right result and cooperate with them. To be more specific, last year, my company had communicated with two commercial companies to make the advertisement. One of them for convincing our company started to make the advertisement in a quick way and the other one informed us they make that slowly but can impressed more. As a result, the company which made the advertisement in a long time, could release the best advertisement which had more viewers in social media. Although, the first company create the advertisement quickest as they can, but it had a lot of mistakes which better to not cooperate with.
Furthermore, when you work quickly and do not consider to make the mistakes, it can create the huge disadvantages for the company. For instance, when I worked at immigration company, one of my colleagues used to filled the application quickly and she did not care to work incorrectly. After a while, all the application had failed because of wrong information and the company forced to compensate a lot of money. Consequently, it is not the good idea to do your job just quickly without examining errors.
In conclusion, having considered the above-mentioned reasons into account, I firmly believe that, working slowly but correctly can make the opportunity to appeal by companies for cooperation. Also, when people work calmy, they do not harm the companies, so who wants to hire trouble maker employee??!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 463, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER
Message: Consider replacing "in a quick way" with adverb for "quick"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...mpany started to make the advertisement in a quick way and the other one informed us they make...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89119170984 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88803289099 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541450777202 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6534005223 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.058823529 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7058823529 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268098151817 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864899867733 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645903245076 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161130580545 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235210116306 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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