Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no shortage of opinion whether in future the fewer cars in use than there are today. In my views, i am disagree with the statement that there will be fewer cares in use than that of today in 20 years. Instead, i feel that their will be growth of cars in future. I feel this way for two reasons which i am going to discuss below.
First of all, Many graphical representations today predicts that the growth rate will not be decrease any way since the worlds population is increasing day by day. As the population increases, the demands and the consumption of services is also hikes. Almost all the people belongs to middle class and upper class holds a car. Every family has a primary means of transportation and that is car itself. My personal experience is great example of this , When i was a child, my family people use to travel by using bus, trains. But after few years, my father bought a car and it was easy means of travelling for us. As we can see the growth of population. i is unlikely that the growth of car can be decrease.
Secondly, There are many cars invented today which runs on electricity. Those cars are called as E-Cars. Natural resources like petrol, diesel are decreasing day by day due to excessive consumption. Also, the price has been culminated to different level and petroleum based cars also produces air pollution in area. To cure this, people will simply start using electric cars so that the pollution, petroleum charges can be avoided. As i said before, the car is totally worth means of transportation for people, so it could not be avoided by them. Many major companies like mercedez, Tesla are taking an initiative to built an electric based cars so that people starts using them for travel. For instance, When i visited the city pune in india, the diesel cars are banned there. despite that, people were using CNG as well as Electric Cars to large extent. However, If the car provides a reliable convenience to people, then people will not ignore using the cars which based on electricity and CNG.
All in all, due to the increasing population and demands of people, the car would not be ignored by people. Considering the petroleum factors, those petroleum cars can be replace by CNG and Electric Cars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, i feel, as well as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55987922287 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5075 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8350784862 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3333333333 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266356902209 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811950944371 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792793901444 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180857070083 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102941344008 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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