Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is an undeniable fact that we live in an ever-shifting world. Correctly anticipating of next step of this transition could influence financial decisions, which eventually led to less pecuniary damage or more lucrative long-term investments. The car industry is one critical area as a worse prediction rose to a vociferous topic. While some people assume that car usage will decrease in the coming decades, others like me, disagree with such an idea. I will explain my reasons in the following paragraphs.
The higher the drastic population grows, the greater the demand for every comfort creature. To clarify, the increasing population will have resulted in developing more suburbs and more commuters. Consequently, most people will work in a place far from their home. In such a situation, public transitions can no longer be a priority, especially when they have to change the lanes due to long distances and consume a lot of time.
Commuters not only change in number but in lifestyle as well. It's undeniable that youth tend to live independently and, less distracted by their family. While many current people live with their family and use one car for all of them but People's lifestyles obviously become lavish, indolence, and luxurious, In coming years everyone living by herself and, willing to possess her/his own home, own furniture and, of course, his/her own car. Consequently, we can expect more single-occupant vehicles. It is also crucial that Such cultural change is not far from the sight of those who benefited from the car industry. The car industry will use this condition by all that power to maintain its customer. These explanations show how population growth will eventually have led to greater demand for cars.
Last but not least, although pollution is worrisome for some people who care about environmental issues and, unwilling to cars utilization, in future decades by widespread electric cars, a satisfying solution to the pollution, will join car using fans.
In conclusion, car use in the future decades will drastically increase; I feel this way because of population growth, expanding people who live in the suburbs, becoming independent with detached livestock demand, lavish, and more consumer lifestyle beside the car industry efforts to keep its costumer are efficient will boosting the number of cars. Additionally, emerging electric cars will inspire those who are currently unwilling to use a car because of pollution.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, well, while, i feel, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.296 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95106639859 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8379199232 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.526315789 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7368421053 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179164396462 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539133062515 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546013024622 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104505725886 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374751675046 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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