Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Universities and colleges have an amalgamation of activities that are provided to the students in order to ensure their all-round development. These activities include classes, sports and other social activities. Even though all these activities are equally important, it is essential to provide a majority of the financial support available to the academical prospects i.e to classes, libraries, laboratories and other required amenities.
The financial support provided to academic activities needs to have an upper hand because the institute is accredited for providing high-level education than it is for providing co-curricular activities. Hence, it is important to provide all the facilities that are needed for academic enhancement and progress.
It is also important because if equal financial support is provided to all the activities, then it will be difficult to provide substantial funding to large projects or innovative ideas. For instance, if a college provided equal financial support to its sports department as well as its research laboratories, and if the sports department did not require the allotted amount because of various reasons like lesser number of sportspersons or smaller strength of the college and on the contrary if the research laboratories require a larger investment than that which is allotted, then it will be a problem. This is because the research laboratories may be deprived of the required facilities for their project and may not be able to complete it. This may lead to a loss of time and utilities. It could also harm the reputation of the college because of their lack of advanced technologies.
Along with that, it is important to understand the total number of the students participating in all the activities in order to understand the amount of financial support to be provided to each activity. For example, if a college has a significant number of students then the library needs to be able to provide academic material for all the students. Hence, the library will need more funding.
Thus, it is important to understand that the major focus of an university or a college has to be academic advancement and so, the financial support must be provided accordingly.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...s its research laboratories, and if the sports department did not require the allotted...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 61, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...t to understand that the major focus of an university or a college has to be acade...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, hence, if, may, so, then, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29378531073 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10781711867 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429378531073 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.0216256748 48.9658058833 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.857142857 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194015397258 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779475887825 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511306533594 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130137174891 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342242076471 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...s its research laboratories, and if the sports department did not require the allotted...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 61, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...t to understand that the major focus of an university or a college has to be acade...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, hence, if, may, so, then, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29378531073 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10781711867 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429378531073 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.0216256748 48.9658058833 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.857142857 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194015397258 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779475887825 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511306533594 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130137174891 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342242076471 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.