Today, there are many opinions about what the best way to use money of the universities and colleges. In most of universities, classes and libraries are well financially supported. However, whether sports and social activities receive financial support depends on the universities. I believe that providing support for sports and social activities is as important as for academic equipment including classes and libraries. There are three reasons to support my opinion, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
First of all, students would want to enter the universities with great equipment for sports and social activities. When deciding which universities to apply, students see not only the classes they provide but also other factors such as their sports gyms and activities. In fact, one of the best private universities in Japan, my country, gets myriads of national sports players because they provide a great environment to practice. Thus, the university becomes excellent not only in their academics but also in sports.
Second, students who plays sports learn a lot better than without working out. It might be true that university is the place for students to learn, but it is also important for them to play sports. According to the poll by Japanese government, students with two hours of working out including sports teams show better in classes for more than 76 percent. It is lucid that universities should provide students opportunities to work out.
Lastly, sports and activities help students to communicate with others. Communication skill is one of the most critical skills when they work for a company. Participating in the activities is the best place for students to get along with fellows. Through these activities, they can gain communication skills as well as friends which are necessary for them in the future. Universities should give students the opportunities to learn these skills, not only the academic subjects.
In conclusion, I believe that providing financial support for sports and social activities are as important as the classes and libraries. This is because the university would get marvelous students not only in academic but also in sports, students would learn better with working out than without it, and they gain communication skills.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the universities') or simply say ''most universities''.
Suggestion: most of the universities; most universities
...ey of the universities and colleges. In most of universities, classes and libraries are well financi...
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Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...ut also in sports, students would learn better with working out than without it, and t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, lastly, second, so, thus, well, as for, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31868131868 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88570361472 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453296703297 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6043151991 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222741255995 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875902136807 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740957374 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149818447829 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927371301835 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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