Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Working is one of the most important parts of our lives in order to earn money. Some people are inclined toward the attitude that workers should provide different tasks every day, whereas, others hold a different perspective. There is no shortage of opinions but I personally, though believe that individuals should be assigned only those tasks for which they are capable. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons for support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that a single person can never do all workers because if it will become possible the demand for specialized people decline. When a person keeps doing a task with time satisfaction increases, as all major and minor points of the task are known. To exemplify, when I graduated from university and my major course was pharmacology at the start I was so afraid that how I will do the job of prescribing drugs. I started my career in the retail drug store. When I was new in the field I was accustomed to hiding from customers and asked my colleague to do it, with time I realized and my all fear goes but doing a repeated job. Thus, this example illustrates how people are satisfied by doing the same task on all workdays.
Secondly, the different tasks always help to learn new things on a daily basis. It is true that it is fascinating for some people, hard work also requires learning new things. There is no problem in doing distinctive tasks all day but chances of being perfect in all of the works are zero. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience that a few years back I was hired as a machine operator in the pharmaceutical company besides operating machines they gave me a task to run the chemical tests for medicines in the quality control department and when I quit that job, on a new job when seniors saw me working on machines they asked really you have experience of a year it does not seems like you have experience. I felt ashamed and decided to focus on one proper task until it satisfies me. Therefore, this instance clarifies the importance of getting specialized in one task.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I strongly believe that people should perform one task at a time instead of doing multiple tasks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...all day but chances of being perfect in all of the works are zero. I have to admit that my...
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Line 3, column 744, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seem'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: seem
...u have experience of a year it does not seems like you have experience. I felt ashame...
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Line 3, column 744, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'seem'
Suggestion: seem
...u have experience of a year it does not seems like you have experience. I felt ashame...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61613691932 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63326431972 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545232273839 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.835789603 48.9658058833 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.058823529 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0588235294 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325078258824 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996350813237 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690192278038 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181489466653 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531020233068 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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