Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
In our modernized world where we live, success and failure of each society is the reliant on the decisions that should be made by the members of that society. In this regard, while some individuals believe that youth don’t have any effects on these significant decisions, I am of the opinion that conversely, young people directly play an important role in specifying the future of their society. I feel this for two main reasons; in the following paragraphs, my reasons will be elaborated on this issue in more detail.
To begin with, since juveniles are more familiar with the rules of modern life, they can better conduct the community to the prosperity than other stratums. To be more specific, it goes without same that, you should be aware of today's lifestyle in order to adapt it to the suitable criteria for making decisions about future. To delve more into it, take a young marriage advisor, who guides and helps the people to find their suitable partner and establish a lifestyle according to today's life principles. As a result, this guidance leads the couples to live more stable and have brighter future.
Second, it goes without saying that youth have higher motivation for playing a determining role in the future of their country than elderly people. Young people are energetic people that faces with dangerous situation and they would like to convert threats to opportunities. Moreover, they look at the future bright, and eagerly want to create the brilliant future with making their decision and actions; therefore, they are able to construct an ideal society for their nations.
In sum, based on all arguments stated above, they have an enormous effect on the determining decisions for the future of their country. Young people not only can equip themselves with modern technologies and methods, but also they have high stimulation for making an excellent future for their community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, i feel, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05379746835 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57473418605 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575949367089 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.396802448 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.083333333 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 5.45110844103 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240835158542 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877393092048 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364439990645 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148949688292 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271533342346 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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