Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today are less dependent on their parents than young people in the past.
No one can cast a shadow of doubt on the fact that parents concern about their children from the first days of our birth. They have a paramount role in the decision-making process of their children in important situations. Children become independence of their parents during the times. Not all people concur when this issue arises. Being cognizant to the logic behind those who repudiate or endorse the legitimacy of this contention, not having any biased perception, I presume that nowadays young people are self-reliance of their parent in comparison to the past. Among a plentitude of reasons in support of this assertion, the invention of new technologies and change in the culture of the today’s societies could be picked out for further analysis.
To commence with, a consensus has yet to be reached; however, regarding benefits of state of art devices, based upon the statistics of different general questionnaires in sundry countries, people are unanimous about the conviction that people could use these facilities such as searching on the internet for obtaining enough data for making a suitable decision. To delineate, they acquire a lot of knowledge and increase their awareness of positive and negative effects of any choose. In fact, these technologies replace consulting with parents in the critical situation. Furthermore, the cutting edge devices decrease their dependence on doing some daily activities. For instance, these devices facilitate their life; moreover, they use some washing machine and some electronic and automatic devices for doing some activities.
In addition to the reason raised above; altering new societies culture’s aspects could also substantiate the justifiability the claim made at the outset of this essay. In conjunction with public belief, people’s values change dramatically during the last decade. The young people attempt to be the independence of their family as soon as possible. For instance, they seek for some suitable chances to finding a part-time job at the same time they are studying. Young people have a severe competition with their peers to shows their ability to the society and proved themselves. The first and most important step in this process is being responsible and self-sufficiency of the family and they should gain their needs solely. Thus, these changes in young people ideas have significance role in the change of society’s culture. A vivid example can be given to shed light on what was elaborated above. The results of a study by Rice University’s graduate students unveiled that about 85 percent of young people separate their life from their parents in the age of 18 in 2016 where this number is about 15 percent in 2002. This example shows that the alteration of people culture in the modern world.
Drawing upon of the above reasons, discreetly put, as far as my personal perspective on the topic is concerned, I reiterate that nowadays young people have more tendency to be self-sufficiency in the first years of the youth in comparison to the past. Not only new technologies are effective in this change but also the cultural differences cause this variation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 89.0 52.1666666667 171% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2665.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 508.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24606299213 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99774325084 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529527559055 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 841.5 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1450439906 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.869565217 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0869565217 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13043478261 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268718494462 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824849508981 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677582175026 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160154595009 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496535912173 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 86.8835125448 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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