Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
extracurricular activities are as important as the educational classes. one should not neglect its value since only a healthy mind has a healthy body. Nowadays parents are obsessed with students getting good marks and not bothered about the physical health of their children this will eventually lead to an unhealthy generation.
It is imperative to provide good exercise for kids at school which will make them and active. In order for that to happen the schools need to provide enough funds for their sports and other social activities. presently due to the lack of exercise and flourishing fast food chains have make children obese. Likewise, childhood diabetics tend to increase in this era. In the past children had enough physical activity which made them physically fit and hence they were less prone to any kind of diseases. social activities like literary and art club will positively influence a child's way of thinking. therefore, support has to be given for activities other than the one with educational purpose.
Additionally, there are sports based scholarships available for students. If a child is talented in games he will admission to well reputed colleges. this will be especially useful for financially poor students. Even though such students would want to pursue higher education the fees might not be affordable for them. The sports scholarship would be like a dream come true for them. there are a lot of young generation who has attained their dream colleges just with sports talent. hence, the universities should encourage the students and provide the necessary facility and help for the extracurricular activities.
To reiterate, I strongly believe that sports and other social activities should not be neglected. In the present scenario the emergence of diseases in childhood has triggered the importance of the activities needed for kids other than educational classes. therefore, it is essential to fund equally for the classes and sport activities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, likewise, so, therefore, well, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3164556962 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85000639517 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569620253165 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2177433521 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.45110844103 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174809488249 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560109686704 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436437479071 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111858631813 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403601828143 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.