Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Children over the age of 15 should be allowed to vote.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The essay topic - allowing children over 15 years old to vote is a controversial issue. There are many positive and negative sides related to the topic. However, I personally not agree with this statement. There are three main reasons for my disagreement those are children of this age are not enough capable to take the decision, they are economically dependent and prone to the temptation of unimportant matters. Those points are discussed below.
First and foremost, electing the country's president or prime minister is an important matter because that governor will be responsible for the development or deterioration of entire nation. Therefore, pragmatic and sagacious persons should take part in the election not the 15 years old children to choose the leader. Whereas, the young aged child is not enough mature to take the decision because they are not prudent and enough experienced to take the decision. For example, before choosing a leader one should know the past background of the leader and the political party. So, I strongly not agree with the opinion that children over 15 years should permit to vote.
Secondly, the voting system should be impartial. Because, if one votes for a leader depending on different conditions like - economic, tax relaxation and another orthodoxy opinion. Then the government body or the leader is not worthy to manage the country's administration.The governor will be biased during his ruling. So that, the steps of the development will hinder and not well distributed. Over 15 years old children are not economically independent. The children depend on their parent. Hence, their parents will force and motivate them to vote for parent's preferable candidate. Therefore, it is not a good decision to allow 15 old citizens to vote.
Finally, children of 15 years old age are generally the school student and if they are involved in the political activity that causes a negative effect on their education. Therefore, they should not allow for a voting related political activities.
In conclusion, according to me, it is not a sagacious decision to allow a child over 15 years old to vote. In my view, the children over 15 years old are not very experienced to make a correct judgment, they are not economically independent and this approval will hamper their study, so they should not allow of voting activity.
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No one can deny that there…
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of allowing children over the age of 15 to vote. If I were forced to choose, i would definitely disagree that allowing children over the age of 15 is a smart thing to do. It is my firm that allowing them to vote isn`t a cleaver thing to do for a number of reasons, that i will develop in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, when we are young, like fifteen years old or less, we believe almost everything that someone tell to us, and we are starting to get our own ideas and opinions. Like when i was fifteen, I was asked to argue what I tough about the president of my country that time, and, one day before, I have read something in the internet, my opinion was based only in that report, so I said everything that i could remember, and everyone laugh of me, because, the report wasn`t true, was fake. As a result of this, I think that allowing kids to vote over the age of 15 is a dumb decision to make.
Secondly, when a kid is fifteen years old, he or she doesn`t care much about politics, and who is governing his or her country. Moreover, when I was fifteen, I only care about school and what my friends think about me, and by this experience, it`s certainly clear to see why children over the age of 15 shouldn`t be allowed to vote.
In light of the above-mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that allowing children over with more than 15 isn`t a smart thing to do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13989637306 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86037425635 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474093264249 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.4632220849 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1818181818 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04545454545 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258053438262 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884100280395 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728024424187 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161939554151 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202966750439 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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