Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People often may debate this argument.It is not easy agree or disagree with this statement without considering good reason for this choice. i personally agree with the statement that support It is a challenge give a good education to the children due to fact, they spend too much time with the technology.I will explore all my reason in the following essay.
First of all, The education at the school nowadays is a became a difficult assestemnet for the teachers. The technology world is taking a big part of the student life, making harder the professor get all the attention . different to the past when the youth have just a paper as a communication path. A compelling example of this was my brothers.He used to play video games and spend all his time doing this, as a result he started getting a horrible score. He is professor called him foe a meeting tried to analyzed. My brothers understand immediately his mistake and focused more in the reality. To avoid suspend the year.
Secondly, The students trend to lose their are capacity of logical thinking and reality due to fact the cell phone and the online games consume too much time.Therefore the results of this kind of behavior affect the school and others areas in their life. For example, about 2 years ago when i was university student. In the biology class the professor asked for a special task to be done. I wrote the indication. instead to finish the task i loosed my time watching my favorite serie.I totally forget about it, 2 days before the task due days one my friend called for a question. I was totally lose , so at the and i wast`n ready so i fail.
In summation, in my point of view. The reason above show clearly the importantly to put all the technology aside. trying to focus in the teachers task to make their work easy , better for all of us
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, as to, for example, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61963190184 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63563520337 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576687116564 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6732906271 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.5376344086 542% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214985643644 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506230731273 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577249967344 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120460431438 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646911493395 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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